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It wasn't even past eight when she ran into her room. She didn't bother and change her clothes as she simply slid under the covers. She cocooned  herself in her bed hurriedly, unable to hold back the smile that crept up her face. She knew that she had acquired a new set of dreams this evening. Dreams that will be haunting her for a very long time. 

She'd banished every other memory on her way home. This one dream was so majestic it seemed unfit to share anything with it. She feared a picture of her precious moment would seep through the smile she couldn't hide and someone would catch it and drag her back into the dull silent world. 

It was a kiss that lasted seconds, but in her head it was a cinematic that went on for hours. Her heart pounded so viciously to the point she thought the sound alone could fill the entire world around her. She recalled her kiss, a blush creeping on her cheeks. 

She closed her eyes tightly as she stirred in bed. Maybe her dream will go on if she goes to sleep. She tried so hard but failed. The pounding was getting louder with each passing minute. She almost thought the neighbors would complain about the noise, or maybe her mother will start questioning her sudden rush to her room. 

She glanced at herself in the mirror. She was beautiful, yet her beauty felt different today. Another smile crossed her lips, but she moved away from her reflection. It may reveal her secret. True her mirror was her best friend, but even her mirror couldn't share her dream, not today at least. She opened the door and went out to her family. She joined them in silence, and pretended not to care as she distracted herself with the voices from television though she couldn't understand a single word of what was being said. Her mind was at a stand still. It refused to take one step further. 

Everyone else fell asleep. Her body was exhausted and drained by then, though her soul had only awakened hours ago, and still soared in the memories. She'd chosen to stay awake till her spirit comes down again and settle within her body. Yet she couldn't take it any longer as she grabbed her phone. She enjoyed the tone the numbers gave as she tapped them hurriedly and bit her lip as it rang on the other side before his voice came through. 

"Hey love,"

"Say it again!"

She heard him chuckle before the word formed through his lips over and over again. 

"Love, love, love, till the world stands still love,"


and then there it was, just when she least expected it. it was raining hard that day and he held the umbrella over their heads. they walked through the park, watching the people flee the downpour, running to catch the last bus of the day, she tried to go too, but he held her pulling her against his chest and softly claimed her lips. 

Edit Sep 20, 2013


:iconttbloodlusttt: you wonderful, amazing lady thank you so much for suggesting this. i am smiling like an idiot right now

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Given 2013-09-20
Suggester says The First Kiss by =SolidMars "encompasses that first fleeting fixation of bubbly, young love. The wind swept emotion of that first kiss and where it takes us seems to be embraced with honesty" and I couldn't agree more. ( Suggested by ttbloodlusttt and Featured by GrimFace242 )
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Suihowl Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist
This is so beautiful... ; - ;
really, you made an amazing job, is so short and impressive at the same time.
Although English isn't my native language, I can feel the text, language wasn't a barrier. : )
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SolidMars Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much, i am glad you enjoyed it 
it's one of my favorite pieces as well 
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Suihowl Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist
You're welcome, it's really good ! :D
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doveangel8 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww so sweet
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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doveangel8 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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doveangel8 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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Black-B-o-x Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
Omgh!  Wow! This is so lovely Love 
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthankyousignplz:
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Lolita-Artz Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aw its so sweet!!! :heart:
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