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It was a single evening
that perished with the wind,
then she decided to delay love
until roses are stripped of thorns,
and her home is washed of sorrow.
Maybe she'll be able to drink
her glass of sadness without added sugar,
and she'll simply hang her heart
from a noose in the ceiling. 

because i am out of titles :|
title is latin for Death of Roses

ps: my latin is rusty, but i think that should be correct. 



 still taking requests for no reason at all. Note me, you can bite me if you don't like it. i am made out of chocolate according to :iconttbloodlusttt: :giggle: 

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buterfligirl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
I really like your wording
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthankyousignplz:
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CKdailyplanet Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Marvelous writing!
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, i am glad you enjoyed reading :heart: :iconbackhug: happy holidays :la:
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KyaniteArcher Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The last two lines are amazing. :) The comma after the fourth line was unnecessary to me, but everything else was pretty good.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, and comma wise i have no idea, punctuation has never been my strongest point :lol:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013   Writer
Ohmy... the melancholy in this is almost touchable in a beautiful manner :heart:

Wonderful work~
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :heart:
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love it sweetie
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :heart:
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ttbloodlusttt Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
This is such a tall bit of melancholy. Yet I feel a sense of longing.
Also the result of settling for something perhaps not desired.
As always, lovely work.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
settling for the less..that causes even bigger damage. 
there's always a sense of bitterness to the poems i suppose. 
i refuse to puke rainbows or  join the light 
:epic: 
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ttbloodlusttt Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
lol I will puke enough rainbows for the both of us.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lololol
that's a sight i'd like to see :lol:
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ttbloodlusttt Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
omg lol me too though it might hurt just a little
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WarriorKatharosKat Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Amazingggggg!!!!Shiny La 

Each new piece you write is just as beautiful as the last, if not more
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you sweetheart i appreciate it. i'm glad you're enjoying them :huggle: 
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WarriorKatharosKat Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student General Artist
You're absolutely welcome! :heart: Hug 
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LMW-The-Poet Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the latin title. :meow: And the poem itself is absolutely beautifully written. :)
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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LMW-The-Poet Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're Welcome. :meow:
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DawnOfThyEmbrace2013 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Writer
Beautifully written poem congratulations :) And yes your latin is correct :)
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug: and that's good to know :D 
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AElfrics-Cat Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, beauty.  Absolutely adore the second half of this.  Such a beautiful, beautiful bit of heartache.  Gorgeous! :aww: xx
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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mashabraslavsky Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
sad...and beautiful...
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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NoFaceTheOwl Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Artist
Wonderful. :O
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cute little text, I love the latin title. :D
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug: me too :D 
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ShackleSoul Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Student Writer
Beautiful, it reminds me of something I wrote recently. I honestly like this more though.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug: and aww man don't put down your own work i am sure it's good 
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