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It was a single evening
that perished with the wind,
then she decided to delay love
until roses are stripped of thorns,
and her home is washed of sorrow.
Maybe she'll be able to drink
her glass of sadness without added sugar,
and she'll simply hang her heart
from a noose in the ceiling. 

because i am out of titles :|
title is latin for Death of Roses

ps: my latin is rusty, but i think that should be correct. 



 still taking requests for no reason at all. Note me, you can bite me if you don't like it. i am made out of chocolate according to :iconttbloodlusttt: :giggle: 

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buterfligirl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
I really like your wording
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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CKdailyplanet Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Marvelous writing!
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, i am glad you enjoyed reading :heart: :iconbackhug: happy holidays :la:
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KyaniteArcher Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The last two lines are amazing. :) The comma after the fourth line was unnecessary to me, but everything else was pretty good.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, and comma wise i have no idea, punctuation has never been my strongest point :lol:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013   Writer
Ohmy... the melancholy in this is almost touchable in a beautiful manner :heart:

Wonderful work~
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :heart:
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RavenSpider Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love it sweetie
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :heart:
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