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He was religion,
she was the world,
it took her a while, 
but she slowly believed.
His verses filled her with a hope, 
beyond her wildest dreams. 

He was love,
She was society.
He seeped in her structures 
built skyscrapers in her skies
and mended the cracks in her fragile bones

He was imagination,
and she was insanity.
together they were the spark
of an idea, that ignited 
a blaze on her mountain peaks 

He was the winter,
and she warmed him up.
She was the summer,
and he was her shade.
They blended together, 
a match set by fate. 

Their path was dark,
so they lit a candle 
and were burned by its flames.
The autumn of their love
turned into falling leaves, 
and she was the victim
of a passion that killed her
in her early years of spring. 
something random

and well...what the hell, every now and then i take a couple poem or story requests. ask me i won't bite, promise. note me and we'll talk. :)

 
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Serenesouls27 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally :iconmyheartplz: the poem :love:
I think each and every word seems so right !
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, i am glad you enjoyed it :iconbackhug:
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Serenesouls27 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:) :)
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EricAMBM Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013   Writer
very nice and very good imagery. 
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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pytryseck Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
love in full imagination :) brilliant 
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :) :huggle:
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pytryseck Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
my pleasure Meow :3 
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sciencevsart Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But earthlier happy is the rose distilled
Than that which withering on the virgin thorn
Grows, lives, and dies in single blessedness.

-A Midsummer's Night's Dream




Lovely poem, indeed. Although the last part was quite sad.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :aww: :tighthug: and yea i wanted the contrast to happen between the four stanzas and the fifth 
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